At 22 spm, I am in pentameter!
Five measures of four pulses.
I'll have to get out my Milton, Shakespeare, and Wordsworth and sing along.
Five STROKES have past; / five summers, with the length
Of (STROKE!) long win / -ters! and again I hear
These STROKers, roll/ - ing from their mountain-springs
With (STROKE!) strong in- / land murmur.--Once again
I (STROKE!) behold / these steep and lofty cliffs,
That (STROKED!) in wild / secluded scenes impress
Thoughts (STROKE!) of deep / seclusion; and connect
These STROKers with / the quiet of the sky.
Interestingly, lines of pentameter take about 2-3 seconds to say.
At 22 spm, my stroke cycle is 2.7 seconds.
I say the eight lines above in about 23 seconds.
8 x 2.7 is 21.6 seconds.
I especially like the syncopated, phrasally asymmetrical, enjambed penultimate line.
Great rowing!
The phrasing of the first line nicely separates drive and recovery, as does the fifth line.
The last line is also nice this way, given that it isolates the last noun phrase in the recovery.
These STROKers with / the quiet of the sky.
---drive---------/-----recovery------
ranger
P.S. Apologies to Wordsworth:
"Tintern Abbey," lines 1-8
FIVE years have past; five summers, with the length
Of five long winters! and again I hear
These waters, rolling from their mountain-springs
With a soft inland murmur. -- Once again
Do I behold these steep and lofty cliffs,
That on a wild secluded scene impress
Thoughts of more deep seclusion; and connect
The landscape with the quiet of the sky.
Rich Cureton M 72 5'11" 165 lbs. 2K pbs: 6:27.5 (hwt), 6:28 (lwt)